Revision 2

During peer review many classmates said that some of our scenes were a little awkwardly long. We looked through the film and picked any scenes that we could edit. I then went back and cut the shots so the movie would flow better. This helps prevent any unwanted jump cuts and makes the action scenes even more suspenseful.

There were several scenes that needed to be cut shorter, including the scene where the two runners are speaking, the scene where everyone is discussing the boss and the ending scene when the boss died. 

Talking scene with runners. I fixed the awkward beginning but making this scene shorter


Conversation scene. The scene was a little too choppy so I edited it together in a way that it flowed more.


The way the camera originally fell implied there was a camera person and it wasn't omnipresent. I cut this scene so when the gunshot is heard you only see the hand on the floor.