Revision 3

Again, during peer editing many people agreed that the ending was confusing and didn't seem to have to have a purpose.

Our initial idea was to imply that someone was entering the conference room, but it wasn't the boss. We were not able to execute this well, so I proposed we shoot a new scene. 

This new scene was a close up of a mysterious person and they are texting someone. 

The messages read:

"did you do it?"

"she's dead."

"are you ready for whats next?"

Then a blackout with our new suspenseful music. 

This scene leaves the audience wondering what will happen next and makes more sense than our original idea.

This is the shot we are replacing with our new scene.